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phew, it's done...
:D

this is for :icongudrighter:'s OC contest, which deadlines is today...

hope I still can make it...





Larke (c) :icongudrighter:
art by me

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:icongudrighter:
Larke by Sylphan is a nice piece overall, but there are some flaws in its interpretation which I will touch upon below.

Interpretation:

Blonde hair... check
Blue eyes... check
Age... The problem in this image is the age appearance. Even though I didn't say it in the brief, the reference picture assumably depicts a figure around his 20s. This however, depicts a 14 year-old of Larke, which I rather like, but does not follow the criteria.

As for the outfit, it is a creative design. Colours match well, just enough to emphasize the golden hair and the blue eyes.

The rapier needs more work I think...

3/5

Presentation:
The drawing is nice, though it feels rushed. Well I credit you for being first to enter.

The piece of typography I feel could be better in terms of size. It could be bigger so it is more readable. After all, this is a piece for devID...

3.5/5

Score: 6.5/10

If you feel that this critique and judgement is wrong or assessed unfairly, please contact me or simply hide this comment.

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I need critiques on my arts... I need all I can get. Please go all out and critique... Don't hesitate! ^.^
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Thankies!

P.S: I'm holding a contest right now.
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Good job.^^
And good luck in the contest.:)

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Life is sooooo wonderfull!!^^
Please don\'t steal art!
:iconsylphan:
Thanks :hug:

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Our days have a cruel time limit with the unavoidable parting waiting ahead of us...

But everyone’s living their lives in their different timeframes...
:icongudrighter:
Btw, kok kaya edward ulrich ya? hahaha

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I need critiques on my arts... I need all I can get. Please go all out and critique... Don't hesitate! ^.^
[link]
Thankies!

P.S: I'm holding a contest right now.
:iconsylphan:
Masa sie :noes:

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Our days have a cruel time limit with the unavoidable parting waiting ahead of us...

But everyone’s living their lives in their different timeframes...
:icongudrighter:
Uwaaaa keren keren... Kita lihat ada lagi yang entry mpe malem ini ga. hehe.

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I need critiques on my arts... I need all I can get. Please go all out and critique... Don't hesitate! ^.^
[link]
Thankies!

P.S: I'm holding a contest right now.
:iconsylphan:
Okay :salute:

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Our days have a cruel time limit with the unavoidable parting waiting ahead of us...

But everyone’s living their lives in their different timeframes...

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